On a star that glittered up above,
I wished for a fairytale.
On an old weathered penny,
I wished for a fairytale.
On an old weathered penny,
Tossed into a fountain,
I wished for something called love.
That might sound slightly stupid,
And crazy, or childish,
But I hope and pray, still.
But I never tell a living soul;
My dreams, to the world muted.
When I am old by numbers,
I'll look back and reminise,
How my dreams became real life.
Until then I'll still wish on
Candles for magic summers.
Candles for magic summers.
LOVED THIS!!! Seems simple as it's easy to read and shortish, yet it's full of a refreshingly "simple" depth! It's GREAT! I find it very hard to write so few words to convey my thoughts or theme. But you did in this one near perfectly while keeping it interesting. They say less is more and this one showcases that very well. Haha yeah, I'm maybe going overbored but I was just absolutely surprised by this one I guess! You're really very good at writing! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks! And don't worry, with me, it's always better to say more than less. What you said meant a lot to me! Thanks!!! I'll do a background on this if you want.
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