I guess it's bittersweet. Ending.
Smile: it happened.
Face faltering. Frog clutching throat. Fogged vision blinding.
Go ahead sweetheart, cry; it's over. Done. Gone. Dead.
The laughs are done. Your new family: gone. A piece of you dies.
Saltwater burns as it falls to the ground, doesn't it?
Some people thing it's bittersweet. Ending.
I think life is bittersweet. Heartaches. Hope. Humanity.
Endings. They're just purely sour.
You have very good writing skills.
ReplyDeleteHere's a poem of mine hope you like it :)
(it's about the good news of Jesus! )
In the darkness their souls wait, longing for the herald’s call,
A man of weakness finds the lamp and swallows candle, wick and all,
A light breaks forth between his ribs, encompassing his body whole,
The sound of peace flows from his lips in language foreign to his soul,
The souls in darkness hear his news and see His shining light,
Some run to him joining his cause; to others he’s too bright,
Choirs of holy saints now sing of wonders yet to come,
Yet souls still in the darkness flee and hate chorus sung,
Though some I weep to mention now, who thought they walked the way,
Have kept the darkness far to near, their hearts have gone astray,
Yet still there’s hope, the master’s near, His light and peace to share,
The souls in darkness can still come, to receive their Father’s care.
Hope you liked it :)
I loved it!! It was truly beautiful. I liked line 6 best. Thank you for sharing. I just posted 'there'. it's kinda my short story about being a Christian. I would love to hear your views about it.
ReplyDeleteWow thanks so much! Already read and commented on "There" ;)
ReplyDeleteJust curious, are you the same person that has been comenting on my other works too?
ReplyDeleteI think so if that's ok with you :)
ReplyDeleteYeah, totally!! I'm glad you are!!! I was just curious, thts all. The anonomous, i totally understand why youre like that, title threw me off. Keep posting please. I want to hear what you think!
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